March 19, 2008
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Steal away
a thread in time
for those who wait
reveal their soul
Bizarre it is
when people open
an awakening
and no more mopin’
Ego at fault
for more and more
needing more things
and money galore
War, we have
within our minds
anger unabated
and hate that binds
We are all one
connected by love
and positive thinking
that comes from above.
I love you!!
Comments (21)
:sunny:Lovely….Hope all is well with your…
Wow. I LOVED IT1:wave:
Love you and love this poem!! You know how much I love it when you post your poetry!
Hey, I hope your day is :sunny: inside and outside!
Hugs, C.
Great poem, as usual! I loved it!
Happy Hump Day to you!!
Alicia
Baby, you are brilliant! How great thou art.:goodjob:
Awesome poem…….loved it….hope your week is going great:wave:
I bow to you. Very nice. Hope you are doing well tonight.
((((Sir Crow))))
:heartbeat: :heartbeat: :heartbeat:
Love your poem.
:heartbeat: :sunny: :heartbeat:
I love that last verse–very much!!!!
Nice poem. Reminds me a little of Obama’s speech the other day.
Positive thinking can come from below too:laugh:
this poem isa the perfect company to my morning tea…. soothing and stirring all the same… spiral in the mind thank you my dear…and if your worndering this is another one of my avatars on xanga (its It_mor_chi_ken)
nice ending!
~Awesome Write!!!~
Thanks terrifically for stopping by with your lovely ‘n lyrical words!!!
Happy Easter!!! Happy Spring!!!
(((Angel Hugs & Love…)))~The Island Concierge~.
Thanks for the props on the refrigerator I doubt though there will be any extra caricular activity included……:wave:
Nice poem.
Thanks, as always, for the upper.
This is beautiful, Laurie. Happy Spring! :sunny: (although it doesn’t much look like it from where I’m sitting…grrrrr)
Nice poetry Laurie. I love you, Judi
That third stanza is good…it stuck out to me
Hope you’re having a good one :wave: