April 7, 2009
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Buttered side up!
Grey-tinged shadows
followed on the path
flowers danced in color
in the aftermathThe sun, while spotty
sparkled the branches
he wondered aloud
what were his chancesArguing was a sport to him
giving up so few
he challenged her intelligence
and made her face turn blueHe knocked upon her door
the black hinged rustic one
The look in her eyes
He knew he’d won!© Laurie Buell
Have a great day!
I love you!!

Comments (6)
That’s awesome writing. How have you been? I haven’t heard from you in a while… Hope all is well.
Wonderful poem as always. hugs
I knock also upon the door , Laurie !!

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Michel
The rustic door with the black hinges? Got it! Except I’m the one with the blue face. Bless you dear Laurie. Happy holiday weekend.
Lovely write. Sorry you are still having problems with your daughter. Motherhood is hard. Going to check out that movie.
Hope you are enjoying a good weekend..